Another thing I appreciated was how much people were laughing over the two humorous stories. I love making people laugh and I've always enjoyed comedy. Comedy is really hard to pull off, so I always feel really proud when I get it right. Laughter is very contagious for me, so it was hard to read with everyone laughing because I couldn't hold back either.
Also, I really appreciated some of the suggestions and tips for where I could go with the stories I submitted. Especially ones people point out about details. Someone pointed out that they were wondering where the bathroom was where Nigel found the dead body. I love suggestions like that! Very helpful. I love it when people tell me what they were wondering about the story, that way I know what to do more. If someone is getting what I want them to get for the story, then I know I need to fix something. Or if there's something I have overlooked (like the location of the bathroom, which is a GREAT idea) that's great as well.
I've decided to expand the one about Nigel and to make some changes to the fox spirit one...
I just hope I gave some helpful advice to other writers, too.
Thank you so much everyone!
glad it worked for--i can't remember who they mentioned either...anyone remember?
ReplyDeleteawww. sounds like you had a good workshop experience. hope you learned some things, or saw something from a new perspective, too.
ReplyDeleteYou pull off comedy like a pro! Wish I could remember the name of the director Suki mentioned.... Can't wait to read your additions~
ReplyDeletecomedy is hard to pull off but you accomplished it almost as if it were an unintentional gift that you just breathe. AWESOME!
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